And always having on a fake smile can eventually lead to self-destruction
Now that you are able to take your mask off and reveal your bright brown eyes, filled with hope
That stage of your life, where you don’t know who you are is finally (hopefully) over
You don’t and shouldn’t need to worry about how you appear in other people’s eyes
Don’t allow your fear of judgment to contradict everything you wish to achieve in life
Have faith and confidence that your own true self is the only thing needed for your success
To believe in yourself is to be able to find the courage to be whoever it is you want
Be the person today that is better than who you were yesterday, and who tomorrows self will thank
Perfect does not exist in this world of imperfection, no matter what appears on the surface, you have to dig deeper
You need to be able to live and respect yourself for who you truly are, and then people will do the same
Can you really say that you are proud of the person you have shaped into?
Be caring towards yourself, and always put your best foot forward in anything you do
Good is an understatement for the type of person you should strive to be – now go find your word.
This poem was inspired by a quote that was shown in class from the novel East of Eden, ” And now that you don’t have to be perfect, you can be good.” I took the approach of an acrostic poem, where you take each word from the quote and make those towards the beginning of each line in the poem. This style of poetry is really interesting and is great for when you have a lot to say about the context of the quote. I also really like how the beginning of each line creates a sentence and it can be really meaningful. Some challenges that can be faced while writing this type of poetry is not being able to generate a sentence that connects with the entirety of the original quote, but once you get over that, everything falls into place. The meaning of this poem is how people are constantly trying to please everyone around them, and that no one is truly able to be who they want without feeling judged or hated. I personally think that when we are able to overcome that fear and realize that everyone is equal and no one is above anyone else, then we will truly be living in a better and more accepting society.
June 17, 2019 at 6:02 am
Sarah,
Let me just say that I like the way you write. Everything you post is relatable to me and my journey in life. I’m so glad that we have gotten to know each other in this class and have helped each other see the bright things in life sometimes.
I like that this piece is a motivational writing, or like an advice type of poem. I may be 100% incorrect though. My favorite line from this is, “Perfect does not exist in this world of imperfection, no matter what appears on the surface, you have to dig deeper”. All my life I tried to be and look perfect, but I am far from that. I do not have perfect skin and I don’t perfect patience. However, I’m started to love all my imperfections, because there are people that have it much worse. I realized that if I see a person who I believe looks perfect, they obviously have insecurities of their own even though in my eyes I see them as a gorgeous or handsome human being.
I really loved this once again!
Eunice
June 17, 2019 at 5:27 pm
Thank you so much for reading my post, and I am so happy you liked it! You’re right, I am so happy we became friends because we really are the same people, an d I cannot wait to continue reading your blogs, of course if you keep up with it lol. I really appreciate the feedback, it means a lot coming from you! <3
June 23, 2019 at 12:13 am
Dear Sarah,
I’m very surprised that you were able to write an acrostic poem and keep it flowing so beautifully, I can definitely not do that. This poem was so sweet and an important reminder for so many people out there. I really enjoyed reading it especially because the theme of my blog has to do with self-love and finding the truth behind being lost and scared.
I found a few grammatical errors. Just make sure to add in periods where they belong and take out commas where they don’t belong. Other than that, your poem was perfect!
Once again, I loved reading this poem, it made me feel very good. Keep up the great work!
~ Maira
June 24, 2019 at 4:51 pm
thanks for taking the time to read my post, I will take your feedback into account and go over the grammar in this piece. I’m glad you enjoyed reading it! <3